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'It's so dark here' said Feliciano. He only remembered he was talking to Kiku about visiting Venice, and then he felt dizzy and fainted. The Italian didn't know where he was then. It looked around trying to understand where he was. It was a small and broken room, full of dust, with a table in the middle of it. It even hadn't any windows to look outside. 'Ve- I don't like this place at all' thought the Italian. While he was thinking, he looked again at the table, in which now there was a doll. 'WhaAAA! I'm sure that it wasn't there before!' Feliciano cried. A bit scared, he got closer to the table to look at the doll. 'It's not scary...' he thought. So, he started to stare that light brown doll, like he was ipnotized by its sight. 'Take me with you' the doll suddenly started to say, and then to repeat, and repeat, with a twisted and high-pitched voice.
At that point, Feliciano snapped out from that sort of ipnosys, starting to back off from that doll, screaming and crying like a baby, closing his eyes...Suddenly he felt his face wet by something...
'Feliciano-kun, are you ok?' Feliciano opened his eyes. Kiku was right in front of him, with a worried face, holding a wet tissue. 'I was worried, because you fainted right in front of my eyes, and the hospital is not so close from here...!' said the Asian. Feliciano looked around, he was now outside, where he was before fainting 'It was only a nightmare...ve...' he mumbled, relieved. 'I'm ok, Kiku, I don't need to go to the hospital' the Italian stood up. He still was shaking a bit, but he didn't care...
He looked around, and started to walk with Kiku by his side. Suddenly, a light brown skinned guy, with light green eyes and black hair, with a rebellious curl, ran towards them 'Mr Feliciano, he's alright? I was so worried!!!' and hugged the Italian. Feliciano became pale. 'Vincenzo...?!' He only managed to said, before pushing the little island away. 'Aren't you glad to see me?' Asked Vincenzo confused. 'It's a bit since you came to my house, last time...But I think you were busy with the other nations, isn't that so?' He smiled. 'Feliciano-kun, so this is one of your relatives...It's Poveglia...right...?' 'Y...Yes...' said the Italian.
They spent all the day there, in Poveglia's House, and Poveglia, before Italy and Japan returned to Italy's house said 'Ciao Feli! See you next time! And, remember to TAKE ME WITH YOU, because I want to meet your friends too!' 'S...sure' said Feliciano, right before grabbing Kiku's hand and run away from that island.

That night, Feliciano thought a lot about the nightmare he have had 'That doll...It was left there...in that broken and dusty room...All alone...And It wanted to make me remember...HIM, I'm sure...Poveglia, the forgotten child...'
From then on, Italy went every month to greet Poveglia and spent a bit of his time with him. He started to do it since the 80's...

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...The first idea for the name of this pic was 'Forgotten child', ('Cuz Poveglia, in some sense was, forgotten) but then I chose 'Take me with you'...XD I think 'cuz Ib is influencing me a LOT...XD

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Assdasd...It was plenty of mistakes... :O XD


MMD Hetalia (and Ib) commission pic (no point needed) [link]

Table (c) *innaaleksui
Italy (c) ~fbandcc
Doll Poveglia
Base (c) !Shioku-990
hair bangs, hair textures (c) ~MMDFakewings18
hair (back) (c) ~amiamy111
ahoge (c) ~ExtremeYaoiFanatic
Stage (c) *MmdMiko
Effects:
Gotha shader
SSAO
Hetalia (c) Hidekaz Himaruya
Story (c) me
Image size
1366x768px 1.72 MB
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Ask-CardverseRussia's avatar
you want to make this look like a creepy pasta?